I am being lazy again this week and I am using the prompts from 3 Word Wednesday to help me with 55 Fiction Friday. The prompts are Caress, Jagged and Ruthless. I really enjoy telling a story in just 55 Words.
Lay beside me, close. I need your warmth, to feel your hands slowly caress my body. Can you hear my jagged breathing, feel my racing heart? I love you. But you are ruthless leaving my bed to go home to your wife. You say soon we will be together, but soon never seems to come……
7 comments:
Very nicely done.
Ah, the age old story superbly told in just 55 words. Great stuff.
Mine's up too.
ah! The pain of the mistress must always be ten times more than the wife! The wife may or may not love, but the mistress always loves...enough to BE a mistress...
no.. it never does..... very well done....
Oh the painful memories...;) Well done! Come by and visit mine. also love the G.Jones song.
Redheels....This story may kick some people right in the gut!!!
The perfect 55!!!
What a superb contribution, thank you so much for sharing.
Thank you for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Great Week-End.
(Yes...very partial to Redheads)
a dangerous situation.. chemistry. i like the 55 words thing.
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