Thursday, June 12, 2008

3 Word Wednesday & 55 Flash Fiction Friday

I am combining Three Word Wednesday and 55 Fiction Friday again this week. The prompts were Change, Key and Dizzy.



Change, I can’t. I know the consequences. I’m killing my family and myself. I need her car key to leave. Can they hold me here against my will? I can’t think, I’m sick, dizzy achy. Thank you God, found it! In my pocket I feel Mom’s ring. I am gone………..I can’t stop, help me.


8 comments:

TC said...

I was allllllllllll set to comment on your story, and then I scrolled to comment and saw the picture for wordless Wednesday and honestly, I'll be lucky if I can think any time soon.

(And if my keyboard doesn't blow up and electrocute me from the drool.)

Voices of NLD said...

It's a wonderful portrayal of a desperate cry for help

myrtle beached whale said...

You have gotten very dark lately. Even the guy in your Wordless Wednesday looked a little vulnerable.

James Goodman said...

A haunting 55, Redheels. Very vivid imagery.

G-Man said...

Red Heels...?
WoW!!!....Great Job!!
Thanks for playing, and I hope this doesn't reflect your mood.
Excellent anyway....G
(if you go back to my 55 and click the word 'grin' you'll know what everyine is talking about)

Akelamalu said...

It's hard enough to do a 55 but you do it and then some!

Mine's up too.

smarmoofus said...

The intensity of your piece is amazing. Very well done.

-smarmoofus

gautami tripathy said...

I echo tc's thoughts. Drooling!

LOL!

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