I see it on your face. The uncomfortable feeling in my stomach tells me I am right. Should I confront you? You will deny it, but that won’t make it untrue. Should I reciprocate? Revenge, so sweet, the thought makes me smile. Would you feel this stabbing hurt? The real question is why. Explain…….please.
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It's really that why, isn't it? Something that just seems incomprehensible to me.
You do a good job on these... I don't think I could tell a story in 55 words!
wow, you are not a woman to cross. I love the evil beauty in the photo. You could love her but not take a chance of falling asleep.
Revenge is not worth it. Let it go..
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I totally agree with TC. Why? Well done!
if only we could read minds...it would be aweful :(
happy 3WW!
great job combining the two prompts!
Ive never participated in fiction fri. Is it writing using only 55 words??
Great 55. I know that sinking, twisting feeling. Well-captured.
-smarmoofus
Redheels...
You should feel like a 'real' writer, because this was an excellent piece of work.
Thank you so very much for sharing this.
Great 55 girl...see you next week!
Galen
oh, a painful 55, but nicely done. It always comes back to why, doesn't it?
combingn the two is most impressive. well done.
Well done. I'm not familiar with 3 word Wednesday only 55's but you did a great job combining both.
Revenge is a necessary evil sometimes... Too much burden.. must be shed..
But...
Success is the best revenge you can take on others!
Wonderful 55 :)
amazing so many thoughts in few words... i can hear it .... that's my story and im stickin to it... on both sides.. lying eyes n revenge...
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